The Hair pack ad

Strong Silk hair pack! - For your confidence
  Do you have a problom with your lion hair?
Want making a boyfriend?
Take our strooooong silk hair pack!
It has an antistatic feature which come down your anoying hair.
And it keeps your hair sweet and soft like a silk.
If you use this one, you will get both girl's envy eyes and boy's curious eyes!!
 Take this and comment your thinking about our new product on our Internet website!
 We select  randomly 500 people who wrote the comments to give one more product for free!!! 
I used two methods when I make ad.
First is Creating needs. I describe it "you want boyfriend? Take our product" or "you don't have confidence? Take our product"
to captivate peple.
And second thing is an Offer people can not refuse.
When customer buy that product and comment of it, we will give one more free.  So  people want chance to buy two with one price.